A pic is posted on Monday, then you write 350 words about it :)
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The slave
It was cage, just like any other cage. She was treated like a princess,
but that did not make up for the fact that she was a slave. A cage was a cage
none the less. And cages happened to girls who did not listen.
Marayna looked through the bars and sighed. She had been here for years
and sometimes she lost hope of ever escaping. She had been a young foolish girl
who had ventured outside the borders of her homelands and had been taking by
slave traders. Even though she knew that elves like her were something everyone
wanted. The Elven Council tried to buy back every slave they found
from the pagan North. But her, well no one had ever come for her.
He was there again. She tried not to look at him but found it hard. She
always wanted to look at him when he stopped by the palace gardens. He seemed
nice, but then who wouldn’t feed the caged animal? Sometimes he tried to coax
her to talk too, but she dared not.
He sighed and walked away from her cage. She watched him in silence and
closed her eyes. She was lonely. She closed her eyes harder so not to cry. So
very lonely. A sound made her look up. He was back. He smiled and offered her
something. She came closer and took it from his hand. It was a honey cookie and
she smiled as she ate it. He tried to speak to her again, but she did not know
enough of their language to fully comprehend him. So he walked away once again.
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Done :D
Done :D
*claps* Brava! Brava! ENCORE! I MUST KNOW MORE!
ReplyDeleteThanks Carole :)
DeleteGreat flash fiction and very emotional
ReplyDeleteThanks :D
DeleteYaY! I missed these!
ReplyDeleteHm... love the beginning and you could still go several ways with this story. So interesting!
Hihi that is what I love. Take which ever ending you want
DeleteOh it's nice it's been a long time!
ReplyDeleteSo very long
Delete*love*
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteLove it...so glad ya did one again!!!
ReplyDeleteI like that ending! And it's been too long since you posted one of these.
ReplyDeleteI know, I have wanted to but never done one
DeleteLoved reading this! Great post!
ReplyDeleteOh!! I love happy endings... I hope it was a happy ending... but we'll never know. :)
ReplyDeletePssst, it was ;)
DeleteA very nice story but the pic is not my cuppa.
ReplyDeleteIt's a bit too sweet
DeleteI love this idea!! Your story was very good, I see I wasn't the only one hoping it was a happy ending hehe
ReplyDeleteThe ending is the one you want it to be :) And I was thinking a hea
DeleteThis is beautiful! I want to know what happens next though! :-)
ReplyDeleteAwww thanks!
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